Evaluation q4 from cara633
Advanced Portfolio by Cara Denton (4067)
Wednesday, 4 May 2016
Evaluation: Question 3
Evaluation – Question 3
What have you learned from
your audience feedback?
Audience
feedback is vital when creating a product, whether it be the music video, the
promotional poster or the digital pack for the CD cover. By receiving audience
feedback, we was able to act upon improvements and by asking an audience of
ages 16-19 years, my target audience would have been ideal as these are the
ages of people I want to target with my products.
I
received audience feedback in many ways, throughout my product and at the end
of my product. During research and planning, I constructed a questionnaire in
which targeted my previously estimated and researched target audience for
answers. I asked ages 16-25 years to answer the 10 questions I had constructed
about what they would like to have seen in my music video I was creating by
asking about previous experiences they have had with music videos. My research
proved that a performance and narrative aspect would be beneficial for me to
produce as this appealed most to my target audience.
With
knowing this, I set out to research into existing products, to develop ideas
and understandings of what was needed to make a music video successful.
I
was able to construct my own music video, by following carefully my research
audience analysis and my research into existing productions and artefacts. This is seen in task 12 for reference.
I
conducted my first feedback session after gathering raw footage and merging all
the shots together in a certain format. Here are the responses I got given:
Improvements
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Actions to Take
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There needs to be a climax at the end of the music video
to keep audiences interested. Could you shuffle around the order of the
shots?
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I originally had the shot of a memory between the lovers
at the end. I got suggested at putting the part where the lover walks away
and the love letters being ripped up might be a good way to end the music
video to suggest their relationship was over.
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There is strange sounds in the background due to being
used from the original soundtrack including background noise. Maybe download
the album version rather than the YouTube version.
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I stripped all music from the first production prototype.
I downloaded the iTunes version costing 99p, which was much better quality. I
edited the music from 5 minutes 5 seconds to 3 minutes 44 seconds so I would
have less need to fill the music with not needed shots. I also believe that
music videos shouldn't last more than 4 minutes as this loses audience
interest.
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The shots looked professional and diverse. It really
captured the break up situation well and using POV shots also made the
audience feel more involved.
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N/A
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After making these improvements
and adding some of my own stylistic elements and filters, I gained much more
positive feedback:
Feedback
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There isn't much wrong with the
music video other than some lip syncing is slightly out which is easily
fixed. Overall, the sepia filter captures Adele's original music video
stylistic elements. The shots have been really thought out and the narrative
is clear and cohesive.
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The plot keeps the audience
immersed at all times, the slow motion and the time lapses are very stylistic
and professionally done. The balance of performance and narrative is even
throughout, branding the artist and the plot still makes sense without the
performance aspect yet they complement each other perfectly.
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The settings and mise-en-scene
used are all relevant, such as performing in a woodland area links with the
memories the couple had and the indoor scenes also do the same. The props
such as the love letters symbolise the break up as well as the phone, where
the artist cries down the phone trying to contact her ex.
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Audience feedback on my
production was vital as my audience could notice flaws a lot easier than I
could by looking at the production from an audience point of view rather than a
producers eyes. The feedback was acted upon and feedback improved. This shows
this is a valuable way of knowing how successful your production will be, as
the audience are the target audience and who the producer caters for; the
audience that makes the music video successful.
I decided asking for feedback in
a classroom environment was a successful way in order to gain feedback. I did
the same for my ancillary texts. I first produced my CD cover as I wanted this
to feature on my promotional poster. My first production received many positive
reviews however some constructive criticism was also included for my
improvements to be made:
Feedback
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Actions to Take
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The CD cover has conveyed the original artists genre and
style very well however the image is slightly fuzzy and low quality.
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I discovered I used too much on the iPiccy airbrush filter
and this made the picture fuzzy, looking like it was low quality when it
wasn't. I redid the cover with this in mind and many agreed this looked
better.
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The CD cover matches the music video well and portrays the
same mood.
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N/A
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The artist is branded well by using a close-up of the
artists face, much like the original. The text also does this with 'CARA 19',
the album name stands out well against the image.
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N/A
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Audience feedback here taught me
that not always what the audience sees is the issue, for instance the image
looked low quality but was a design flaw in my choosing. By retracing my
creative process, I can pin point the issues and revert these changes.
After making my CD cover, I moved
on to create my promotional poster. This included the CD cover also. I decided
to use a screenshot of my music video to continue the theme of synergy
throughout my products. After creating my promotional poster, I again used the
classroom environment to gain a reaction from my ideal target audience. Here
are the replies:
Feedback
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Actions to Take
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The poster doesn't include a release date or price range.
This might be good to include as this distributes more information to the
audience and follows conventional music promotional posters which usually
include price and company logo's.
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I will use the original copy and add another layer
suggesting the RRP of £9.99 after researching into iTunes prices, the company
in which I will also include on my poster.
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The rating appeals to the audience as they enjoy opinion
and reviews. The artist is branded clearly and also features what the album
cover will look like so when released and available to buy, audiences will
know what to look for and will notice it is this specific album.
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N/A
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The artist elements such as the lens flare adds to the
genre of funk soul, and the almost opaque image of the artist layered onto of
the solid image is very artistic and stylistic, capturing the artists style
and genre of the album. The use of promoting the hit single song will drive
sales as this is the most noticeable song off the album in which audiences
strive to buy.
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N/A
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Audience realise media merchandise techniques such as
including pricing and company logo's to create synergy as these techniques are
now common and look odd when not used. The audiences can pick out missing
information and report back to the producers to clarify and fix this.
Overall I believe audience feedback plays the biggest part
when creating media products. This is because the audience decided on how
successful the product is by driving sales and figures. Without an audience,
there will be no product to create as the audience of media are essentially the
creators.
Wednesday, 27 April 2016
Thursday, 18 February 2016
Video Production feedback
The film has been edited
with a sepia filter to mirror the original Adele video. A lot of the techniques and the style of the
video are drawn from the original and this shows an ability to achieve the look
of a broadcast standard video. The use
of the focus allows close up detail and shifts in perspective and loses focus
only on occasion without affecting the narrative. A selection of shots are edited together in
montage at the start using creative angles and focus to add variety. Use of the
camera is steady and appropriate when it moves to add to the professional
quality of the piece. Shots match the contemplative mood and atmosphere. Canted angle and close ups are used to
provide variety and detail and to engage the audience. This is an effect used
in the original. Exterior shots are well composed using the rule of thirds and
vanishing points cross cutting between a convincing performance and a narrative.
The artist is clearly braded in a series of well directed close
ups. There is another montage of time
lapses including well chosen mise-en-scene. The time lapse of the sky is scaled
on Adobe premiere showing sophisticated editing skills. The emotion comes
across due to the quality of the filming and editing 35/40
Wednesday, 17 February 2016
Video Production feedback
The film has been edited
with a sepia filter to mirror the original Adele video. A lot of the techniques and the style of the
video are drawn from the original and this shows an ability to achieve the look
of a broadcast standard video. The use
of the focus allows close up detail and shifts in perspective and loses focus
only on occasion without affecting the narrative. A selection of shots are edited together in
montage at the start using creative angles and focus to add variety. Use of the
camera is steady and appropriate when it moves to add to the professional
quality of the piece. Shots match the contemplative mood and atmosphere. Canted angle and close ups are used to
provide variety and detail and to engage the audience. This is an effect used
in the original. Exterior shots are well composed using the rule of thirds and
vanishing points cross cutting between a convincing performance and a narrative.
The artist is clearly braded in a series of well directed close
ups. There is another montage of time
lapses including well chosen mise-en-scene. The time lapse of the sky is scaled
on Adobe premiere showing sophisticated editing skills. The emotion comes
across due to the quality of the filming and editing 35/40
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